aloneagainfriend's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[m00nlight] - 1.0]

EEK!

The distorted kick and pitchy wah on the drums really kills a great melody.. sadly I can only give a 3 for this one :(

[New Melody - Comment Please!]

Though I hate trancy stuff...

... this is a melody that could be turned into something EPIC! max scores for this one pal.

[Sunshine_*]

AW MAN!

AGAIN I SAY! ALMOST a 10! the only thing holding this one back is the quality (again) & it needs a bit of mastering work.... hum... what to vote? what to vote?.... .... I like the melody, the title fits... but it does kinda hurt the ears and seem to have a bit of un-needed distortion... 4/5 :P

[SoSexy]

lol

Kinda complex track you got here. Personally I think it feels a bit empty... Is it just the one synth throughout? sounds like it... try adding another one & maybe even an arp. Btw, I hate that vocal clip.... "So Sexy" LMAO! Almost got a 10 for this one dude. I'm gonna keep listening to a few more of your tracks... You should give a few more of mine a listen... I like seeing what people have to say.

5/5

[The Basshunter Song - RmX]

OMG NO!

Not ANOTHER Basshunter Rmx :P LMAO! I like the gainy, distortedness of this track, but again, the quality seems low... I just finished reviewing that Rainbow rmx song btw ;) 5/5

Frajola responds:

:D~

Basshunter rocks, and this low quality thing, it's my lead...
He's kinda noisy, with a 'SHHHH' sound.

[Welcome to Rainbow RmX]

It's good

but the phasers are to heavy... I see you are trying for a Basshunter sound, but the quality seems low. Not a bad track when you break it down. 5/5

Frajola responds:

Yeah, iv've manually phased it.
It sounds like crap :X

[You Say You Want Love (It's R.]

Man...

.... I have listened to alot of your rap... & I hate rap! but your vocal style is SOOOOO VERY CLOSE to epic! Wanna try and work a track togather sometime? I would really like to get ahold of some of your vocal tracks and see if I can't get them to sound more like I would like them to ;)
Any way, keep up the good work dude. 5/5 for encouragement.

(Sounds like she would be lucky to have a guy like you, man... even if "she" ins't real) lol

[Ninja Furenji Ending Track]

HEY!

Gongrats dude! EPIC drum work btw. Did you do them your self (drum for drum) or just use some kind of resampling (or i guess it could be just a pre-made sample)?

Check out my tracks if you got some time. Go for "My Mechanical Nightmares" WIP or "It's Our Little Secret". They are my personal favs.

[starwars jumpstyle WIP]

ok ok...

The one sided mixing style is cool... The kick doesn't seem to be as pronounced as it should in places, The robo-voice of, what I think is, "Denver in the house" and especialy the "Jumpstyle Jumpstyle" thing... I dont like it. The over-the-top distortion is Just A Bit much on a couple of the melodys, it makes it a tad harsh on the ears in spots (maybe crank it up Real loud b4 you save it to watch for overly pitchy noises, or use a slightly differant production technique). And be carefull not to make it to trancey.... Most people like the fancy, high pass, filtery work of typical "Epic Trance", But I cant stand it, It makes, what would be great electronic music, seem commerical & generic. So after listening 4+ times, I give you a 5 (for the interesting combo of genres, cause you picked a good star wars loop to work with, and just for encouragement) :)

I got some tracks up... My new one was just a child-like, pop based, melody, and some experemental drum programming, So If you check em out, Listen to the "My Mechanical Nightmares" WIP or "It's Our Little Secret" (they are my personal favs)

You could, maybe, send a pm when you feel you have reached the final product (for re-review or just to let me hear it)

Thanks dude, and keep at it! Club kids love Hard/Jumpstyle. ;)

TheFatBunny responds:

thanks your review is greatly apreciated im planning to work on it some more it should be fully done by december

oh and the reason i put the "denver in da house" and the "jumpstyle jumpstyle" in the song is because certain people tend to steal my music
and put it on other sites claiming that its theirs =p
also im very poor and i only have fl studio8 fruity loops edition

[One Universe Away]

D&B Fits Perfect with Classical...

max scores!

bittertooth responds:

cool. thanks for the review.